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Nightbooks

The Nightbooks series, Book 1

Katherine Tegen Books
Fiction, MG Fantasy/Horror
Themes: Books, Cross-Genre, Diversity, Fairy Tales, Felines, Twists, Weirdness, Witches
****+

Description

Since he first saw Night of the Living Dead, young Alex has been obsessed with monsters and scary stories. He writes his dark tales in journals he calls his "nightbooks" - until the night he sneaks out of his apartment to burn them all, tired of being the weird kid in school.
Alex never makes it to the boiler room.
On his way to the basement, he finds himself drawn to Apartment 4E, lured by the sounds of his favorite movie and the smell of pumpkin pie. Once he crosses the threshold, his fate is sealed. Trapped by modern-day witch Natacha and her cunning feline familiar Lenore, Alex must tell a new story every night to stave off a fate worse than death... only he's running out of stories, and Natacha is running out of patience.

Review

This modern-day fairy tale crosses "Hansel and Gretel" with Scheherazade and a healthy dose of terror. Alex loves scary stories even as a part of him worries that his obsession is proof of some flaw in his soul: maybe he really is a monster like his classmates seem to think. Finding himself trapped in a scary story of his own proves far less fun than he anticipated, but even then he can't help being awed and even excited by some of what he finds in the magic apartment, where the living room is crowded with creepy artifacts and doors are as likely to lead right back to the room you left as anywhere else. Natacha is a wicked witch straight from an old fairy tale, terrifying and powerful and no easy opponent to outmaneuver; she spies a kindred spirit in Alex long before he admits his own weakness. Alex hopes to find an ally in Yasmin, another captive, but she has her own pains and problems, while the often-invisible Lenore threatens to unravel any escape plan he manages to concoct. Worse, the stress and despair hamper his ability to write the very stories that are keeping him alive. Periodically, the reader is treated to short tales from Alex's nightbooks, creepy confections that tend to dark endings; White does not pull punches or water down the horror side of this story. It moves fairly quickly, through several terrifying incidents and more than one failed escape plan, to a fitting finale. The whole is a memorable tale full of twisted, nightmarish imagery and characters who truly feel the horrors they are forced to endure.

 

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Gravebooks

The Nightbooks series, Book 2

Clarion Books
Fiction, MG Fantasy/Horror
Themes: Books, Cross-Genre, Diversity, Dreams, Felines, Ghosts, Girl Power, Weirdness, Undead, Witches
****+

Description

It has been some time since Alex, Yasmin, and the magical cat Lenore escaped from the clutches of Natacha, the wicked witch in apartment 4E. Back then, Alex loved writing scary stories in his "nightbooks" - a habit that led to his capture, as Natacha demanded new stories from him every night. But these days Alex can barely jot down a sentence, let alone a story. It's not just the trauma, though of course there's plenty of that. It's also not just that Yasmin no longer is around; he understands that he is a reminder of that terrible time in Natacha's clutches, which she endured far longer than he did, so of course they don't hang out anymore. It's that nobody seems to care about what he writes - not his teachers, not his peers, not even his own family. His stories just don't seem to matter to anyone but him... and now, they don't even seem to matter much to him. Besides, whenever he reads his favorite authors like Ray Bradbury or Stephen King, he realizes that there's no way a boy like him can ever hope to master words like they can, so why try? Maybe he'd be better off leaving his nightbooks and his dreams of writing behind.
But the dreams, it turns out, won't leave him behind that easily...
One night, he dreams that he stands in a graveyard - a vast landscape under a night sky, each marker a story idea he never pursued, never finished, left to languish and die in his nightbooks. And here, too, he finds Natacha - the witch he and Yasmin thought dead. This is no mere phantom of his sleeping brain, either. It's really her, or a ghost of her, and she can do him real harm. Once more, Natacha demands he write new stories, better than he's ever written before, one for each gravestone under the unreal moon. If he fails, she won't let him wake up. But he can't write, not anymore, not like he used to.
Soon, he realizes the threat he's facing in this nightmare is worse than anything he confronted in 4E, worse even than the witch Natacha alone... and, if his words fail him, it's not just Alex who will suffer. It's Yasmin, Lenore, and everyone he loves.

Review

I read and greatly enjoyed the original Nightbooks, but never thought it needed a sequel. That said, the little of J. A. White I have read led me to trust him: if he had written a sequel, there must be sequel material worth writing. (And, yes, the audiobook also slotted into empty space in a work day again. I'm nothing if not predictable in my desire not to be bored at work.) Was my faith in White misplaced? No, it was not. Gravebooks is a worthy successor to Nightbooks, expanding on the themes of writing and storytelling while escalating the threat and the obstacles Alex and Yasmin face.
In the previous book, Alex was torn between his passion for dark stories and his worries that they revealed some darker rot inside him, that by writing bad things it meant he was in some way a bad person; maybe that was why a witch like Natacha wanted him. But one thing his time trapped with her proved was that his stories had power, and they were worth telling... or so he thought then. His enthusiasm and eagerness to show his stories to the world (after so long being ashamed of them) unfortunately ran head-first into two problems that have nothing of the supernatural about them: the rest of the world, and maturity.
Outside of Yasmin and the witch herself, it seems that nobody is that interested in reading his tales or engaging with him about writing at all. Mom and Dad can't even be bothered to read anything, even though Alex notes that they make all the time in the world for his brother's sports events. He also is not the child he used to be; he's growing up, and as he's growing up, he's learning to see his writing with a more critical eye. In addition to making the classic rookie mistake (if an unavoidable one) of comparing his nightbooks to the published works of seasoned genre masters, he's realizing that coming up with an idea and even finishing a draft are far, far removed from crafting a story worth telling, one that speaks to friends and strangers alike, one that will put images and emotions and ideas in other people's heads that match the ones in his head when he wrote the tale. Like an artist who realizes that, in order to progress, they'll have to learn more about fundamentals like proportion and perspective and shading to properly pin down the images in their mind, Alex is just now realizing how daunting the task of developing writing skills truly is, and comes to doubt whether his ideas, which now seem weak and childish by comparison to the great works he reads, are worth all that effort, even if he were capable of it (which he's certain he isn't). Never mind that, logically, all but a very few rare prodigal creators have had to tackle those same learning curves to produce the finished, polished products one finds in a bookstore; emotionally, especially to a young and inexperienced writer previously fueled by the thrill of inspiration alone, it all looks like too much, taking far too long, and their own stories suddenly seem too worthless to invest that much in. The patience, the willingness to persevere even when it seems one isn't going anywhere, the ability to stay focused on such a long-term and ephemeral goal when it can feel more like a chore or slog than fun, that all takes time to develop, and for a kid especially that sort of patience is not always easy to come by, particularly when one lacks external support and guidance from family or peers or other sources. Alex is right at that age where many choose to give up on creating because it just seems like too much work to get where one wants to go anymore, feeling more frustration than excitement. He's about to call it quits altogether when the nightmares come and Natacha returns. Here, among the metaphor-made-literal gravestones of his abandoned stories, he undergoes a crash course under the worst possible circumstances, forcing him to learn how to buckle down, dial in, and find the story inside those unfinished ideas - ideas themselves being little but a spark, a starting point, plentiful and ultimately worthless as a grain of sand without an actual story to tell, the pearl around the sand... and, like the oyster discovers while forming the pearl, irritation is often an unavoidable part of the process. Under literal threat of life or death, Alex must figure out how to avoid hackneyed and obvious plots, how to find his own twist on familiar themes, how to keep readers interested without confusing them, and what makes for a satisfying reading experience. Most of all, he learns the invaluable lesson that, without perseverance and the self-discipline to push through the frustrating parts, writing is never finished, and a writer never learns.
There is, of course, much more to Gravebooks than a writing lesson packaged in a horror tale; there's the horror tale itself. Alex's situation has echoes of his time trapped in Natacha's enchanted apartment, but he is not the same kid he was then, and this is far from the same threat. Natacha herself is just one aspect of something far more insidious, something that fascinates even as it terrifies. It goes without saying that Yasmin finds herself pulled into danger as well, for all that she has tried to distance herself from Alex (and from the cat Lenore) for her own sanity; after her escape, she was plagued with PTSD, and tries to avoid any potential triggers now that she's slowly rebuilding her life outside apartment 4E's walls. Still, she and Alex share a bond that's not easily broken, and when he's in trouble, she wrestles with herself over whether she can survive reaching out to help. It's not much of a spoiler that the matter is taken out of her hands at some point, but there are several times where she must make a choice about how far she's willing to go, how much she's willing to risk. Alex, meanwhile, struggles over whether to accept her help; part of him is still hurt to have been set aside so cleanly, for all that logically he sympathizes and understands why she walked away, and that same part of him wonders whether she'll be willing or able to get past her own pain and fear to help save him from the nightmares and the dangers they represent, if she can be counted on. As Alex endures his nightly torments, she has her own quest, her own demons to face down, her own part to play.
Triumphs give way to setbacks, steps forward become steps back, numerous stories flow from Alex's reluctant pen, and it all builds up to a nicely satisfying conclusion, one that - again - has threads that could be taken up in future stories, but are just fine left how they are here. If J. A. White decides Alex and Yasmin (and Lenore) have another story to tell, I, for one, will eagerly listen... though I do admit to feeling a bit called on the carpet over letting my own creative urges gather too much dust in the graveyard of my mind (even a few decades of lived experience apparently isn't enough to shake all of those insecurities and self-doubts to let oneself pursue acts of creation, unfortunately, though adulthood has its own ways of squashing ambitions and enthusiasm...).

 

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The Thickety: A Path Begins


Tantor Audio
Fiction, MG Fantasy/Horror
Themes: Books, Cross-Genre, Diversity, Girl Power, Locations with Character, Plants, Religious Themes, Weirdness, Wishes and Curses, Witches
****+

Description

Kara Westfall was five years old when she learned how cruel her village of De'Noran could be - the night that she and her mother were both accused of witchcraft. The village is dedicated to the Path, the teachings of the savior who, two thousand years ago, sacrificed himself fighting a plague of witches and monsters who nearly destroyed the world. Her mother did not survive that night of accusation and judgment, but Kara did... only to live as a pariah, same as her broken-hearted father and sickly kid brother Taff. To them, the Westfall family is still tainted by association, even after years have passed and neither Kara nor Taff have shown any signs of magic. Kara refuses to believe her mother was actually a witch. Witches are evil things, after all, and she knows her mother loved her, and no evil thing could possibly love.
Then the strange bird with the single eye draws her into the Thickety, the forbidden wood that spawns evil weeds and worse beasts, to a buried book that whispers of great powers. A grimoire - possibly the very one that belonged to her late, doomed mother.
As Kara finds strange powers wakening within her, she begins to see her village in a new light. But magic is as much a curse as it is a gift, and if Kara isn't careful she could destroy everything and everyone she loves.

Review

I read and enjoyed J. A. White's chilling standalone tale Nightbooks (reviewed above), so I figured I'd give this story a try. Like Nightbooks, it skews toward the dark side; while generally nongraphic, it doesn't shy away from danger or death, or the gray areas of morality that separate good from evil and right from wrong. After her innocence was shattered at a young age, watching her mother killed by her friends and neighbors (while her father stood by, apparently one of the very "witnesses" who turned her in to the town leader), she learned just how unfair and cruel the world could be, even as she strives to stay on the cultlike Path of the Puritan-like religion the islanders practice. No matter what she does, though, she and her brother are treated like monsters, shunned and bullied, while her father drifts in a state of deep depression that makes him more child than man. Kara can't help resenting his behavior, even as she struggles to keep him and her brother fed on an increasingly lifeless farm against increasingly insurmountable odds. For all that she can't bring herself to truly hate her tormentors, there's only so far a girl can be pushed, and she's just about at her limit when the odd little bird shows up to tempt her across the forbidden boundary into the Thickety.
Like everyone else in the village, she fears the Thickety, and has ample evidence from her own eyes of just why it's to be feared: the weeds and saplings at the forest's edge regrow almost overnight, and at least half the plants are toxic in some way. But there are also healing herbs to be found in the fringes, as Kara's mother taught her. This duality of nature is echoed throughout the book, from the neighbors who can be kindly (at least to each other) and cruel, the father who loves her yet inexplicably betrayed her mother, even to the magic that Kara discovers when she's led to the buried grimoire. There is, she discovers, great potential for good in it, chances to right wrongs and heal wounds and even explore the wonders of her world in a new and interesting way... but there's also a terrifying temptation with the power it offers, and a price to be paid. And even if Kara can manage to avoid the temptation, others in the village may not; she is not the only one in De'Noran consumed with resentment and frustration over the hypocrisy of the people and the Path. Through it all, she strives to protect her often-sickly brother Taff, born the very night the villagers killed their mother, even as she fears her very presence endangers him more than any illness. It's for his sake as much as her own that she pushes herself farther than she thinks she could go, endures things she did not believe she could endure - and wades into deeper, darker, and murkier magic than she knows is wise.
From the first few pages, where a young Kara is snatched from her bed by neighbors and forced to stand trial before the village, the plot moves at a decent clip, showing its darkness early on and only skewing darker as the tale unfolds. The villagers may be ignorant of much about magic and witches, but they aren't entirely wrong to fear the potential of magic or the power within the Thickety - truths driven home when Kara finds she's not the only one with the talent, building to a climax pitting her against everything she was raised to fear (and then some)... and an epilogue that reveals a final twist of the knife, setting up the next installment of the series and the next stage in her personal journey. It made for interesting, if occasionally chilling and brutal (especially given the middle-grade age range) listening. I wavered a bit on the rating, but wound up giving an extra half-star for not pulling its punches.

 

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